Today we decided that it was best if we changed our story but keep the genre. This is because our previous story had a lot of loop holes in it and also because it didn't make any sense e.g. the friends going on a random camping trip in the woods. This wasn't realistic enough so we tried to adapt it so the girls had a sleepover at a friends house. We then realised that then would also be to complicated as there would be no way of keeping the murder anonymous from the other friends. We thought about it and decided to keep the idea of the group of friends bu